Tuesday, November 2, 2010

My Feedback on Preliminary Task

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In my Preliminary task I used good cinematography at the right time for example when There was a shot of Jacks facial expression, the shot used was a close up to show and express his feelings. There also is an establishing shot at the beginning of my film to inform the audience were it is based and the scenery. I was told I used Shot revers shot very well, and my cinematography was interesting with this I also used the 180 degree rule. This makes the clip more interesting and realistic because if the rule is not used the footage is not believable for the audience. My continuity was also very good, I was told the scene, were I hand-shake Jack was well edited because the two different shots flowed together.

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The parts which was not as good was were I did not use the continuity editing well on the clock, the mistake was were the was three shots of the clock but with different times which was not good. I should speak a little louder in my next task because my voice was quite low and unclear.
Taking on my Ebi's I am going to make sure I improve by doing them on my next task.


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